Monday, June 12, 2006

Mass mailing - whadya think?

I'm planning to send a postcard to everyone in our zip code area about our church's pavilion. This is what I have so far:

AVAILABLE FOR USE: Fair View Pavilion
Do you need a place for your special event? Our 40'x60' pavilion is available for public use - no fees and no strings attached! Reserve it for a reunion or just stop by for a picnic and enjoy the view. It's our gift to the community. Contact the church office for more info or to reserve a date.

Picnic table seating for 72; Plenty of electrical outlets; Lights; Restrooms available upon request; Playground equipment and basketball; Plenty of parking; Handicap accessible.


Do you think that's too much or too little? Does it sound pretentious at all? I couldn't get it to set up on here how it is on the postcard, but there's also a pic of the shelter. The idea is to let people know they can use it. I would appreciate any feedback.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

What you have sounds great Dan.

I do have a question...If I wanted to "stop by" for a picnic how would I know if someone else already has it reserved? Is there a list/sign somewhere on the building?

You know how my head works, so if this is stupid just ignore it.

dan said...

That's a good question, Frank. You're right, there probably needs to be some kind of sign to let people know that. Thanks for the input.